Nice artistic style!
I can tell you put a lot of attention into your art work, keep working on your animation skill and I see portal awards or even front pages in your future. Keep it up! Oh yeah, also the humor in this cartoon was fairly original, and that'll take you a long ways in New Grounds.
Thank you, I will be working on all my episodes in a 2 month period for release on newgrounds. So trust me when I say, the animation will be much crisper.
Your artworks killing you
It's funny cause I was thinking about doing a music video for this song but dropped the idea because I thought it would be to hard to represent. You've done a pretty good job, the song is very well in-sync and express the ideas of the song quite coherently. However, your artwork is holding you back, I realize some of the things you did where quite hard to draw such as fallinog into bed, but you should either take the time to do these things effectively or figure out someway around these shots. Take more time on these problem areas and you'll do fine.
Will do.
Thanks! ^_^
Ending?
I liked it, but then you ended it very abrubtly. I'm guessing you got bored; which I can understand, but I can't give it as high of a score as I might of otherwise.
Fair enough. I might continue it, I don't know.
Just Wondering...
Hey I noticed the usage of Cal pictures and I was wondering if you went or not? Anyway your animation skills need a lot of work (as I'm sure you know) but it made me laugh which I guess was the objective of the movie. Also, your movie may have set a record for inside jokes per second in a flash.
Yeah, humor is foremost when it comes to animutation. As for the record, I hope so. I used Google and in-joke memes for a majority of the pictures, but I have been to Cali and I think it's awesome. I'd like to live there some day...
People like shiny things.
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